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A Troubled Mind's Chronicle - Part 2: Angel Of Destruction
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A Troubled Mind's Chronicle - Part 2: Angel Of Destruction

5/28/09
twenty one days had passed
tewnty victims
And he was still calm
If anyone saw his face,
there would be no way they could think he had done it
twenty one dead bodies
He looked at the window and saw the rain falling
Rainy, wet days.. just the kind of weather he loved
He went down the stairs and put a cup of coffee in the microwave
One hundred wats, one minute and thirty seconds, START
Coffee was ready.. he turned on the radio
The chief police was talking
"It is really weird, we can't say if this is something done by one person or by a gang, what we can say for certain is that the police is searching everywhere, trying to find clues wich would eventually lead us to the ones who did this horrible things"
He laughed out loud, there would be no way they'd find who was the murderer
He only had one method... but untraceable
Randomness
Murders were spread throughout the day
some were in the morning, others in the afternoon
Midday, dawn, twilight, night..
Random..
As for killing... Knives
Clubs, hockey sticks..
even once, the day he was in his worst mood.. screwdriver
There was one thing in common with all of them
Perfection
No traces of struggle, not any unnecesary movement
Perfection
It was as if he was born for this
He laughed out loud and drank his coffee
A priest was on the radio now...
"And if no human can solve this, we hope God would judge this murderer when the time comes"
He dropped his coffe
the cup crashed to the floor and shattered into a millon pieces
God??
God didn't exist, God couldn't exist
Because there was so much evil in this world
He had seen his life ruined so many times
He remembered two years ago,
crossing the street and holding his girlfriend's hand
An SUV ran through them... he managed to stay alive
only to see his girlfriend's body fighting desperately against death
"I beg you, save her, don't let her go, she's the best thing I have, she's the best part of me"
He managed to stay alive only to see his beloved one die...
God?? God had taken all in his life
God had taken all there was good in this world from him
He got out and screamed to the sky
"You think you're good enough to judge me?? I'll show you how it feels like when someone takes away everything you cherish"
He knew exactly what he had to do
He went back inside his house and turned off the radio
Cleaned up the coffee mess, and grabbed the screwdriver
He looked at it and left it where it belonged
"He took her with his hands.. Now I'm gonna take his beloved ones with mine..
It's time to make myself public"
He grabbed his carkeys
And drove to the radio station....

Guestbook Comments (3)

Correcciones S.A. al rescate :)

jajajaja

Me encantó esta segunda parte! Pero tiene algunos errores que te detallaré a continuación:

"Coffee was ready".
WRONG! Debería ser "The coffee was ready", porque estás hablando de una taza de café en particular.

"There would be no way they'd find who was the murderer"
Indirect question: Who the murderer was. :)

"...not any unnecesary movement..."
Error de spelling. Debería leer "unnecessary", doble S. :)

"It was as if he was born for this"
Acá necesitás el pasado perfecto: It was as if he HAD BEEN BORN for this.

"The cup crashed to the floor and shattered into a millon pieces".
Error de spelling: el número se escribe "MILLION" ;)

"He got out and screamed to the sky"
En este caso la forma correcta sería "AT the sky". ;)


Listo... eso sería todo... jajajaj

Espero ansioso la parte 3!!!

Un abrazo cheee ;)

no leii un carajo era obvio esoo :P
jaja
pro estoy pasando, firmandoo
y observando q actualizaste dssps d un siglo !
jaja
te qieroo pavoo
linda tarde la d ayer :)

chaboonness estan re crazy macaco jaja

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